I was gifted these 3 beautiful strawberries this week. I put them in a little bowl and looked at them for some time...they smelled soooo good and were so pretty. I started thinking about the William Carlos Williams poem, the one about the plums in which he apologizes for something that he really doesn't regret doing. I came up with this poem...
I told you
I would cut the strawberries
mingle them with yogurt
but they were
too red
and
juice-burdened
So I bit into them
whole.
Forgive me.
I couldn't help myself.
they were as sweet
as candy
and just as
wonderful.
The original poem, if you don't know it, went like this:
This is Just to Say
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold.
There is a wonderful little book titled "Rose, where did you get that red?" in which the author, Kenneth Koch, took a well-known poem and read it to children and asked them to write something in the same style. This is my favorite, after he read them "This is Just to Say":
This is just to say
I have taken the eggs
Of the bird's nest
But I didn't have
any sense that the
Mother bird is looking
For its children and
worried. I am sorry
Mother bird and I shall
return them when they
Hatch. I just couldn't see
Them out there in the
Cold Weather.
~Hector Figueroa
I am going to keep this little book with me for awhile and do some poetry exercises of my own. I've been missing poetry lately and it's sort of like dipping a toe into the water after a long winter inside. The older I get, the more I want to gather the things that I love around me. Poetry is one of those things I put away for awhile but it's time to bring it out into the light again. Bear with me.
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